zzy19840101 发表于 2010-9-1 16:18 只看TA 72楼 |
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很有創意,故事也很有趣,希望楼主再接再厉 |
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mjsasuke4839 发表于 2010-9-2 08:43 只看TA 76楼 |
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很有创意的文章,不过细节方面的描写有待加深 |
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allison811 发表于 2010-12-17 09:59 只看TA 80楼 |
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Wow, what a dramatic story! I wonder what happen to the other man, the bad magician, after he took the lamp. It will be very interesting if he appears in the story because I believe it will make the story flows much better. |
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